Wednesday, October 13, 2004
Rhyme
when you have a housemate with a little sister who needs to write a rhyming poem for homework, you get 2 19-yr-olds working on "fat, cat, bat, sat...." and "fly, sky, die, lie, my....".
we kept reminding ourselves not to use words too big for a little p5 girl.
BUT when we proudly presented our poem to her, she insisted that it was very wrong because it was not pro enough! *diaong* hahaha
anway
this was what we came up with.....
At the Beach
Blue skies, palm trees,
birds fly.
A place where you'll never hear a sigh.
Warm sand and waves
so high,
Splashing and swishing
into the sky!
Indeed, i am talking
about the beach.
Hanging out there are people
poor and rich,
Playing with a beach volleyball
they cannot ditch!
With a gentle breeze,
I sat on my mat.
And watched my cat
chase my hat.
Having fun in the sun?
It has just begun...
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